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VVC 08 Premiere Vid: Tanglewood Tree

  • Aug. 16th, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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Video Title: Tanglewood Tree
Song Title/Artist: Tanglewood Tree - Chris & Meredith Thompson
Show: Fingersmith
Summary: Forbidden fruit, tangled webs and betrayal.
Length/Format: 4.00, (Xvid, Stream)


Notes:
Premiered (non-attending) at Vividcon 08. Beta comments from [info]foomatic, [info]bradcpu & [info]astartexx. Many thanks!

Fingersmith has a complex narrative structure that proved quite difficult to get across. All the ways I thought of to convey a dual POV (split screens, rewinds, colour coding) just didn’t sit well with the period setting. As a result I think the details of the plot are probably not going to be clear to anyone not familiar with the source. Hopefully the general themes of longing and betrayal are strong enough to make the vid accessible.

Music. I love the tone and imagery of Tanglewood Tree and finding a version of it with two female vocals gave me exactly what I wanted. The key scene with the carriage at the asylum at the point where the vocals split was my jumping off point and in effect splits the vid into two distinct parts which I hope I managed to convey visually.

Narrative. A tale of three metaphors!
The cards: Used by Gentleman as a device for explaining the plan but most closely associated with Susan. The meaning of the 2 of hearts is fairly apparent (hopefully.) It’s probably also helpful to remember that the jack used to be referred to as the knave which makes it much more appropriate for Gentleman. The cards are used to tell a story to Susan but she herself uses them to lie to Maud. The card is as much a symbol of deception as it is devotion. In picking it up Maud takes on the role of deceiver (though that’s not really clear until later.)

The gloves and the hand: Associated with Maud and symbolic of her constrained life. Crossing the line metaphorically by stepping over the line physically. Noticeable that when Susan has the glove it is her turn to be confined.

The windows: Gentleman is never who he appears to be. Although he is the first character to appear in the vid his face is revealed last and when it is, it is through a window. The glass may appear transparent but is slightly distorted and that is very much true of gentleman. This device is repeated several times. It also represents the separation of male and female worlds with both women seen looking out at a larger world.

Effects and colouring: I added some external motion to improve the flow and to add emphasis. Transitions are all just good old reliable cross fades. I did some relighting in after effects, mostly to enhance what was already there and in a couple of instances to direct attention. The second half of the video has a grittier grainier feel as befit’s the subject matter. Also I added some fog to the street scenes. I know it’s a cliché but Victorian London should be foggy dammit.


Tanglewood Tree

love is a tanglewood tree in a bower of green
in a forest at dawn
fair while the mockingbird sings, but she soon lifts her wings
and the music is gone
young lovers in the tall grass with their hearts open wide
when the red summer poppies bloom
but love is a trackless domain and the rumour of rain in the late afternoon

love is an odour that creeps through the meadows of sleep
when the long shadows cast
thin as a vagrant young vine, it encircles and twines
and it holds the heart fast
catches dreamers in the wildwood with the stars in their eyes
and the moon in their tousled hair
but love is a light in the sky, and an unspoken lie
and a half-whispered prayer

I'm walkin' down a bone-dry river but the cool mirage runs through
I'm bankin' on the fables of the far, far better things we do
I'm waitin' for the day of reck'nin countin' down the hours
I burn away, I yearn away, I turn away the fairest flower of love, 'cause love . . .

love is a garden of thorns, and a crow in the corn
and the brake growing wild
cold when the summer is spent in the jade heart's lament
for the faith of a child

love's garden of thorns, how it grows
black crow in the corn hummin' low
brake nettle so pretty and wild
and thistles surround the edge of the
dim dark hour as the sun burns away
lamenting a lost summer day
who nurtures the faith of a child
when nothing remains to cover her eyes?

my body has a number, and my face has a name
and each day looks the same to me
each hour the light unfolding
this longing is a voice on the wind
she cultivates the wages of sin
in a tanglewood tree



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[info]giandujakiss wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 02:19 pm (UTC)
I haven't seen the movie (or read the book) but I thought that was incredibly powerful. I'm sure I'm not getting all the nuances, but the storyline definitely came across and drew me in.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 06:42 am (UTC)
It's a relief to know the storyline came through without needing any prior knowledge. Thanks for commenting.
[info]fahrbotdrusilla wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
Simply lovely. The song fits the storyline so well and the editing is perfect.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 08:13 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[info]m_phoenix wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 05:27 pm (UTC)
That was wonderful. I loved Fingersmith, first the book and then the adaptation, and you really did the story justice here. The themes of betrayal were deeply unsettling for me, and in your version they still are, but the music carried me through -- perfect song choice. I'm feeling all tingly. Think I need to go and watch that again.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 10:24 am (UTC)
Cheers! It is such a dark book and the adaptation was pretty faithful to that so I was able to use the song to get the betrayal across and it really is a fab song. Awesome comment thanks for telling me how much you liked it.
[info]kiki_miserychic wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 05:54 pm (UTC)
and a half-whispered prayer
Wow. I love the follow through of motion. There's tension built up with the music and the editing.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 01:28 pm (UTC)
Re: and a half-whispered prayer
Thanks, Kiki. I'm glad you mentioned liking the motion because the source is quite still in places. Building the tension was a big part of what I was aiming for so the second half has a greater sense of urgency.
[info]bradcpu wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
I'd definitely say this was one of the two or three biggest hits of non-attending. It actually *closed the show*!
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
YAY this makes me all kinds of happy. Can't wait to read these con reports.
[info]millylicious wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
That was great, definitely one of my favorites of the vidshow. I thought it actually had the best narrative of all and I could really follow the story you were telling without actually knowing anything about the source (always the sign of a strong vid). I'll leave you more comments once I've had the time to see it again :D
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
Looking at the playlist it was up against some strong contenders particularly "Scarlet ribbons" - love that vid! To be considered one of the best is high praise indeed. I'd love to hear more of your thoughts. Yay vidz.
[info]balistik94 wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
I was really moved by this vid. I'm impressed by your storytelling and your ability to convey emotion. Very deep and powerful.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 05:12 am (UTC)
Narrative in vids is something I particularly value its such a crucial element of vids for me. So it's particularly pleasing for you to say that it had that as well as emotional impact. Many thanks.
[info]oxoniensis wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 07:03 pm (UTC)
I didn't know anything about the book/show before watching the vid (I've read a recap on wikipedia since then), so the way the story shone through was impressive. Beautiful work.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 10:43 am (UTC)
Thanks for telling me you enjoyed the vid. I can definitely recommend the book Sarah Waters is one of the best writers in the historical genre. The TV adaptation is pretty faithful.
[info]ralst wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 07:17 pm (UTC)
That really captured the emotion and complexity of the source material. A beautiful piece of editing.

And on an unrelated note, I love your mood graphic.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 10:53 am (UTC)
As I said in my write-up, I found the complexity of the narrative quite difficult to convey, to hear that I *did* capture it for yourself and for others is a huge relief.

The mood graphic is awesome, isn't it?! [info]cowboyhd made it.

[info]idealuk wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
This is the perfect video for a superb film based off of a great book. Other than that, I have no words; I am speechless.

Edited at 2008-08-16 07:56 pm (UTC)
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 02:27 pm (UTC)
I love both the book and the film and I just wanted to do it justice.

Many thanks for viewing and telling me you enjoyed it.
[info]boom_queen wrote:
Aug. 16th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)
What a fabulous vid!

I absolutely adore Fingersmith, and I'm really impressed at how well you depicted a coherent visual narrative (for those who haven't seen it) while still providing plenty of delightful meta/insights on the tangled relationships and unraveling mystery of the story. Gorgeous editing as usual too :)

Yay!
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 02:34 pm (UTC)
Wow, what a lovely comment. I really do hope that it works for anyone who doesn't know the material whilst not being too straightforward for those with a better knowledge of the source. If I've succeeded in that then I've absolutely achieved my aims for the vid.
[info]uselessmarks wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 03:42 am (UTC)
I thought that was f*cking awesome.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 02:35 pm (UTC)
Heee yay! \o/
[info]aycheb wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 12:56 pm (UTC)
This was heartbreaking even without knowing the source although now I feel as if I do. Loved the way the symbolic elements, the cards and the gloves, felt as if they held all the secrets of the first part but were crumpled and crushed and emptied of power when it had stopped being a game. That last bright image of dancing girl just a memory, is so poignant at the end.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you. I am *so* pleased you were able to get so much out of it. The symbols were very important to the structure. You are right, the first half of the vid is all game playing literally as well as metaphorically, whilst the second half is when it becomes very real and has an entirely different feel.

Thank you so much for sharing your insights.
[info]marycrawford wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
I loved this to bits, and I thought it would be a perfect closing vid for the show. I've read the book but not watched the series, and I really want to do that now. :-)
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
What an unexpected honour to close the show! It's fabulous to know that you rate it so highly. You absolutely must watch the series.
[info]demeter94 wrote:
Aug. 17th, 2008 06:32 pm (UTC)
I haven't seen the movie, but both movie and book have been recced to me, and now I'm even more curious than before. Powerful song that has me addicted now, great editing that fits with the lyrics perfectly.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 11:17 am (UTC)
I can certainly second those recommendations. It's great to know that the vid made such a good impression. Thanks!
[info]__butterflies__ wrote:
Aug. 18th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
I love both the book and the series. In fact, the book is my favorite book of all times.

The video is really interesting. It's really busy, so I'm going to have to watch it a few more times. I loved the cards metaphors.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 03:59 pm (UTC)
In general I find films and TV series based on books are never quite as good as the original but this adaptation came close. I hope you find the vid just as interesting after watching it some more.

Thank you for commenting.
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[info]thuviaptarth wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 01:05 am (UTC)
Will have a more coherent comment later, but wanted to let you know how much I liked this. I was startled when the music began because this isn't the version of the song I was expected -- your vids often do this to me, and I am always persuaded by your *version* choices, not just your song choices, they are always so right! This was lovely and striking.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
I'm glad I convinced you with this version of the song. I was aware that it might put some people off but I decided it was worth it for this vid even though I prefer to listen to the original.

It's great to hear that you enjoyed the vid. Thank you! :)
[info]laurashapiro wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 01:45 am (UTC)
I was reading The Night Watch on the plane, but I don't know Fingersmith, and now I need to find it, read it, watch it. This vid drew me in and just kept on pulling -- the story was so clearly told and so devastating as it unfolded. Your vid broke my heart, is what I am oh-so-incoherently saying. (: I can't wait to watch it again.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 04:26 pm (UTC)
The Night Watch is a great book, I finished reading it a few months ago. When you get round to reading Fingersmith I'm sure you'll enjoy it, Sarah Waters doesn't write a bad book. As for the adaptation I believe she had considerable input and it has stayed pretty faithful, definitely read the book first though.

It's fantastic to know that you got so much out of this vid. I hoped it would appeal to people who know the text as well as to a wider audience. Many thanks Laura.
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[info]jhava wrote:
Aug. 19th, 2008 07:35 pm (UTC)
This is a beautiful vid. Talk about a vid that encourages viewers to find out more about the mini-series without giving too much away! Through your careful editing you've hinted at enough to intrigue many viewers. Thank you!

[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 20th, 2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Thank you. I hope it does encourage people to watch the mini-series.
[info]foomatic wrote:
Aug. 20th, 2008 09:51 pm (UTC)
Yay! I love how lyrical this is, and the way you used the cards as symbolism. But I think I already told you that? Heh. Great vid, as always, and it's good to know that people were able to follow it!
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:13 am (UTC)
Thanks for commenting, Foo. More importantly thank you for looking the vid over and giving me your thoughts, it was very helpful.
[info]lilithlee wrote:
Aug. 21st, 2008 08:44 am (UTC)
Ok, I read this once, but didn't review becouse I like that to understand this I at least had to watch the movie. So, I after finding it on youtube and watching it. I loved it, I loved all the twist and turns, it was great. Also wanted to say what a powerful piece and it just awesome.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 22nd, 2008 10:15 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
[info]eleveninches wrote:
Aug. 23rd, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
I really liked this. I've never seen the movie, but I've read the book, and it looks like you did an excellent job at showing the relationship between... uh... the two characters whose names I forget.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 10:05 am (UTC)
Thank you. It's nice to get positive feedback from someone who knows the story without knowing the mini-series. Glad you enjoyed it.
[info]dodificus wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
I really want to re-watch the miniseries now:) This was beautiful and tragic and captured everything I loved about the books and movie.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 10:06 am (UTC)
Wow, thank you so much that's a really wonderful thing to say!
[info]bop_radar wrote:
Aug. 25th, 2008 08:15 am (UTC)
I really loved this vid--on first watch, and I'm sure I'll get more out of it on further subsequent watchings. It makes me really want to watch the source. I want to know if I got the plot right or not!

I'm fascinated by the card imagery. And also by the way the women appear to swap positions so often in the imagery. Around the 1:30 mark, it built up this feeling for me of them being tied together in an ever-changing but continual pattern.

And what an amazing song this is--it seems perfect for the subject matter. As you say, that moment where the vocals overlap and then split is so powerful. The asylum footage is so disturbing.

Edited at 2008-08-25 08:15 am (UTC)
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 06:05 am (UTC)
I was hoping this vid would be an appetiser for the mini-series. I condensed the narrative a lot, wanting to say as much as I possibly could in 4min but also leaving enough of the story for people wanting more.

It built up this feeling for me of them being tied together in an ever-changing but continual pattern.
Exactly! There is a sense in which, during the middle third of the vid, the characters are involved in this sort of intricate dance of deception.

I love the original version of this song but this one with the two female vocalists just works so well for this subject.
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[info]luzula wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 05:11 pm (UTC)
Wow, I loved this (although I'm probably influenced by the music, which is just to my taste). I can't say I understood all of the story, but it was intriguing, and now I feel like watching the show.
[info]charmax wrote:
Aug. 31st, 2008 05:02 am (UTC)
It's great that you enjoyed the vid so much and that you liked the music, wasn't sure people would. If the vid made you want to watch the show that can only be a good thing.

Thanks for the feedback.
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